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 Aug 8 2007, 12:17 AM
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Ok this 1 and the one i'm currently using (Blue Kanji Honer) are ones I have recently made! Yay! anyway i'm looking for as critical ratings and advice/hints/help/ on how I did and what I can do to improve these. Please be honest
  
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Aug 8 2007, 12:49 AM
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Looks nice Alderon.
 But without knowing what the intended end result or effect was meant to be and for something to compare it to, it might not make any sense to critique it. It seems like the background blends or bleeds into the foreground. Is that intentional? And the outline on the render seems to be a bit "thick". I dont think I quite understand the desired effect of that. 
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Aug 8 2007, 01:17 AM
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Graphix Newbie Group: Members Posts: 4 Joined: 7-August 07 Member No.: 2232 |
to be honest these were my first 2 EVER and I was just trying to make some fun looking ones no desired affects. Sorry for not being specific but as you can see I am a noob to this! :P and thanx for the critique.
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Aug 8 2007, 01:24 AM
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Admin Group: Admin Posts: 53172 Joined: 2-May 04 From: Between kernel & shell Member No.: 1 OS: Win XP Pro Processor: Dual 2.66G Intel Video Card: 8800 GT RAM: 3G DDR2 |
Excellent for first time work Alderon! I didnt realize it was your first.
I wish I was that good in the beginning. 
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Aug 8 2007, 01:27 AM
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Graphix Newbie Group: Members Posts: 4 Joined: 7-August 07 Member No.: 2232 |
QUOTE(jan @ Aug 7 2007, 09:30 PM) [snapback]80363[/snapback] Excellent for first time work Alderon! I didnt realize it was your first. I wish I was that good in the beginning. thank you (^_^) -------------------- |
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Aug 8 2007, 01:30 AM
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Admin Group: Admin Posts: 53172 Joined: 2-May 04 From: Between kernel & shell Member No.: 1 OS: Win XP Pro Processor: Dual 2.66G Intel Video Card: 8800 GT RAM: 3G DDR2 |
Are you using PS? If so which version?
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Aug 8 2007, 02:48 AM
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It's either beautifully drawn or beautifully assembled
 The only 'niggle' I'd make is that the central figure (very Indian looking, by the way) could do with being a different complementary colour, to make it stand out more. Something approx the matching shade of green perhaps???  --------------------  When you were born, you cried and the world rejoiced - Live your life in such a manner that when you die, the world cries and you rejoice. |
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Aug 8 2007, 02:29 PM
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Nice work, :)
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Mar 5 2009, 03:38 AM
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 TheKinG Group: Members Posts: 66 Joined: 22-February 09 From: Wouldn't You Like To Know? Member No.: 5598 Video Card: 8800 GT |
Nice work, keep it up.
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